Title Scene 'The Intruder'

This is the scene I have used to show the title of my film. I only used very minimal editing on it, using the animations that Final Cut provides, as I thought it fit in with the film very well. Being the opening shot, I feel that this scene sets up the narrative well, clearly showing that a person is watching the films protagonist, and the camera angle used makes Abigail look vulnerable as she is unaware that she is being watched by the unknown figure, meaning the audience instantly take Abigail's side. The animation of the text across the screen had to be slowed down quite significantly as it kept overtaking the Niamh walking, which would have ruined the effect of it.