The Intruder second draft

This is the second draft of my film, complete with the changes I made after sending the film and the survey out to members of my class. My next step will be to upload the video to websites such as Facebook and Twitter, where I can reach a broader audience and get more reviews and answers to my survey. I feel that this draft is as close as it can be to the final product however, and that the surveys will give me very little to help, but they will still be useful for audience feedback.