Evaluation

The link to my evaluation website can be found here https://jackgrimshaw01.wixsite.com/mysite

Final Magazine

This is the second draft of my magazine article. I have added a sidebar with other reviews on it as I presented my poster to a small focus group and the main issue that arose was that the poster was a bit empty. I used screenshots from films that other students of the media class have previously created or are in the process of creating. I have been told that the writing itself is fine and requires no editing, so I think my magazine is now in the last stages of production and I will only have very few changes to make if any after showing it to another focus group.

Final Product

This is the third draft of my film, and hopefully the last. I have presented my previous drafts to multiple small focus groups, my course teacher, and individuals such as my friends. With this third draft, I plan to upload it to social media and show it to much larger audiences, still with the same survey as before attached. This will help me see what changes I will need to make before the end of this week, my last chance to edit before half term. Fortunately, I believe this draft is now enough to pass as my final production and I am happy with the end product.

Final Poster

Magazine Article First Draft

This is the first draft of my film's online magazine review. I have already written a blog post on why I chose to use 'Dog and Wolf' as my review site, and I think the text I have written seems professional and suits the review well. I used Photoshop to create the look of my article and will send it around my class and using social media attached with a survey in order to see what needs improving and what is good about it.

The Intruder second draft

This is the second draft of my film, complete with the changes I made after sending the film and the survey out to members of my class. My next step will be to upload the video to websites such as Facebook and Twitter, where I can reach a broader audience and get more reviews and answers to my survey. I feel that this draft is as close as it can be to the final product however, and that the surveys will give me very little to help, but they will still be useful for audience feedback.

Film Survey Responses

These are the responses I got from my classmates in relation to my film. Whilst I didn't get as many responses as I had hoped for, they still gave me a good range of answers and have showed me what I need to change or fix in my film. My text step will be to fix the kettle scene and the speech I missed a 2:47 in my film, which I hadn't noticed until I sent the surveys out and got the responses.